From ef6ed03e2f7e757a46469077d8ef66cecccb919d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Arian van Putten <aeroboy94@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Dec 2018 14:49:19 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] nixos/nscd: Address doc feedback

---
 nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml | 25 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml
index 975c566411c0..9405bf063d51 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml
@@ -247,22 +247,21 @@
   </listitem>
   <listitem>
    <para>
-     The <literal>nscd</literal> now disables all caching of
+     The <literal>nscd</literal> service now disables all caching of
      <literal>passwd</literal> and <literal>group</literal> databases by
      default. This was interferring with the correct functioning of the
      <literal>libnss_systemd.so</literal> module which is used by
-     <literal>systemd</literal> to manage uids and usernames in the presence
-     of <literal>DynamicUser=</literal> in systemd services.
-     The was already the default behaviour in presence of
-     <literal>services.sssd.enable = true</literal> because nscd caching
-     would interfere sssd in unpredictable ways as well.Because we're using nscd
-     not for caching, but for convincing glibc to find NSS modules in the
-     nix store instead of an absolute path, we have decided to disable
-     caching globally now, as it's usually not the behaviour the user wants
-     and can lead to surprising behaviour.
-     Furthermore, negative caching of host lookups is also disabled now by
-     default. This should fix the issue of dns lookups failing in the
-     presence of an unreliable network.
+     <literal>systemd</literal> to manage uids and usernames in the presence of
+     <literal>DynamicUser=</literal> in systemd services.  This was already the
+     default behaviour in presence of <literal>services.sssd.enable =
+       true</literal> because nscd caching would interfere with
+     <literal>sssd</literal> in unpredictable ways as well.  Because we're
+     using nscd not for caching, but for convincing glibc to find NSS modules
+     in the nix store instead of an absolute path, we have decided to disable
+     caching globally now, as it's usually not the behaviour the user wants and
+     can lead to surprising behaviour.  Furthermore, negative caching of host
+     lookups is also disabled now by default. This should fix the issue of dns
+     lookups failing in the presence of an unreliable network.
    </para>
    <para>
      If the old behaviour is desired, this can be restored by setting